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BmG's avatar

A beautiful hope-filled vision. I hope my loved ones are basking in the warmth of ancestors and friends. Or just electrons frolicking through the universe.

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Bonnie Canelakes's avatar

Love that. I just know in my soul that’s as close as a human can get, with words anyway, to a description of “what happens after”.

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

Yes, that’s the perfect way to think of it, Bonnie!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I like this poem a lot. A great take on perspective. But what does he mean by the final line?

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

I envision a welcoming person or group at the end of the journey happily waving “Here she comes!” It could be a boat or a human passing over to the other side. Or heaven. It’s apparently read at funerals.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Oooh it didn’t cross my mind…

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Richard B (Norfolk, UK)'s avatar

I have heard it read at a funeral. Very moving. Thanks for sharing it

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

Thanks, Richard.

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Judith L Hubbard's avatar

Beauty. Simple and fine.

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Diane’s Blue Forum 👩‍💻's avatar

Thanks, Judith—it has stayed with me a long time.

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Katharine Hill's avatar

Wow!

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